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Wikipedia; Editing
Topic Started: May 12 2006, 07:26 AM (142 Views)
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Frank Worthington
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I am editing the Kenny Cunningham page on Wikipedia with the following would anybody add/remove word it differently....

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In 2005, he was awarded Birmingham City’s 'player-of-the-decade' by co-chairman [[David Sullivan]], a personal tribute from the Welshman.

However after the club’s relegation at the end of the 2005/2006 season, Cunningham was released along with seven other first team players. On May 11 2006, Cunningham contacted the press with honest and biting criticism of the Birmingham board and manager [[Steve Bruce]].


*I'm not sure about the word 'honest' - i do think they were honest but it smacks of bias - what should i put instead*
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May 12 2006, 07:26 AM
*I'm not sure about the word 'honest' - i do think they were honest but it smacks of bias - what should i put instead*

frank or candid ?
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May 12 2006, 07:32 AM
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May 12 2006, 07:26 AM
*I'm not sure about the word 'honest' - i do think they were honest but it smacks of bias - what should i put instead*

frank or candid ?

Cheers maybe even 'direct' i dunno
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May 12 2006, 07:35 AM
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May 12 2006, 07:32 AM
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May 12 2006, 07:26 AM
*I'm not sure about the word 'honest' - i do think they were honest but it smacks of bias - what should i put instead*

frank or candid ?

Cheers maybe even 'direct' i dunno

I'd probably leave it out altogether - "biting criticism" just about says it ...
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update i've gone with 'openly frank' instead of 'honest'
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May 12 2006, 07:41 AM
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May 12 2006, 07:35 AM
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May 12 2006, 07:32 AM
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May 12 2006, 07:26 AM
*I'm not sure about the word 'honest' - i do think they were honest but it smacks of bias - what should i put instead*

frank or candid ?

Cheers maybe even 'direct' i dunno

I'd probably leave it out altogether - "biting criticism" just about says it ...

good point i just didn't want to make it look like the retaliation of a man scorned
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how about

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the press with criticism of the Birmingham board and manager [[Steve Bruce]].


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it would sound like a minor complaint
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